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March 7th, 2012, 2:00 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
Bandaids on the moon? Now that's just loony.
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Reply melaredblu, March 6th, 2012, 7:11 pm

And on that note, chapter one is now finished. Even though the story has only just begun, I'm glad to see some people are enjoying it. Next Wednesday, chapter two will begin with a double update. Huzzah!

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User's Comments:

Reply EsinoLolly, March 7th, 2012, 2:28 pm

Oh snaps! Can't wait for the next chapter and see what it has in store! :D

Reply chicken-blast, August 8th, 2013, 12:50 pm

Well, that's love and joy alright.
Also, best dad award.

This has been a blast so far. I'm hooked. Your story flows smoothly and there is chemistry amongst the cast. The magic system is simple (for now) and simply works.

You got right into the plot and there's plenty of momentum to carry forward.

Reply DizzyJump, October 17th, 2013, 2:31 pm

The art isn't normally what I'm used to and setting the story felt sluggish. However once the introduction of "Spiders", I got used to the style and appreciated that the panels weren't the nit-picky perfection. Characters are well expressed, but was looking for more background on the antagonist evil force.

Overall an impressive 1st manga. And as each of your pages improved and created more depth, I'm very interested to see how the storytelling evolves! Nice Debut.

Reply melaredblu, October 17th, 2013, 6:12 pm

@DizzyJump: I agree, if I could go back and redo the intro, I would have gone with in media res instead. As for the antagonist, the current story arc will elaborate more, but again, if I could redo it, I would have given more background on that as well. Sound advice, though. I wish I'd thought of it before and either way, I greatly appreciate your candor and your time. I'm glad you think well of it as a first attempt.

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