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Reply melaredblu, March 26th, 2014, 3:32 am

In which Brunswick makes a gross understatement.

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Reply GroovyKinda, April 2nd, 2014, 3:55 pm

@melaredblu: Yikes.
Well, that explains the darkness behind him on the last page.
Poor Brunswick.

Reply Hjels, April 2nd, 2014, 5:22 pm

I LOVE the textures on that hand. And why do *I* get the feeling, old Brunswick is going to meet with a undesireable end if Leopold and Chroma don't pick up on what's happening right sharpish. Can't trust Chuckles and Chucklette to intervene in time.

Reply melaredblu, April 2nd, 2014, 5:44 pm

@GroovyKinda: Not gonna lie, part of the reason this page exists is because of something you said a few pages ago. I got an idea from it and...well, you'll see what happens next.

Reply melaredblu, April 2nd, 2014, 5:48 pm

@Hjels: I think Chroma might have an inkling something's amiss. The Monochromes have a habit of telegraphing their moves big-time.

Reply GroovyKinda, April 2nd, 2014, 6:08 pm

@melaredblu: I think I know what you mean.
I love that bubble. You colored it beautifully. It looks like it took a long time to get right.

Reply Delta-v, April 3rd, 2014, 9:31 am

I really like Chroma's reaction in panel 5. I've seen "takes", "double takes", "spit takes", and "eye bugging takes", but I can't remember ever seeing a "hair ornament take" before. I love your off-beat sense of humor!

Reply melaredblu, April 3rd, 2014, 10:13 am

@Delta-v: Thank you, but it's actually just her hair that's puffing up and that's really common in anime. Even Miyazaki, who doesn't use many anime cliches, played with this one.
http://weheartit.com/entry/35144235

Reply Delta-v, April 3rd, 2014, 2:52 pm

@melaredblu: Now that I look more carefully, her hair whatzits didn't lengthen, you just changed the perspective a bit. The only thing worse than ignoring a clever innovation is crediting someone for something that didn't happen. Sorry. *blush* Now, if you'll excuse me, I think I'll go dribble my oatmeal down my chin, lose my hearing aid, and drive with my turn signal on.

I still like her expression, though.

Reply melaredblu, April 3rd, 2014, 4:41 pm

@Delta-v: If anything, it's my fault for having too low of a shade contrast between her hair and hair decorations and now that I look at it, that panel is crowding her in too much. I think I'll do a little editing on it when I get the time.
*edit* There, the composition should be much clearer now. I need to learn to break my panels more often.

Reply NitztheBloody, April 4th, 2014, 6:38 pm

That certainly escalated quicker than anticipated!

Reply melaredblu, April 5th, 2014, 6:03 pm

@NitztheBloody: What they don't know is the Monochrome just wants a high-five. Poor thing.

Reply GroovyKinda, April 6th, 2014, 12:33 am

@melaredblu: 2 guards + 1 king + 1 princess + 1 plum-excuse me, page.
Looks like the monochrome realy does want a high 5.

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